www.dichtung-digital.de/2000/Simanowski/27-Feb

Index - Pref - Def - Coll Writing - Hyperfiction: 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 / Hypermedia - Epilogue

In the earlier mentioned hypertext Zeit für die Bombe a situation arises in which the character Iwan opens a suitcase and discovers something that looks like a bomb. He is tempted to press the red button. The next sentence turns his temptation into ours: Don't we all want to press or turn something? The encouragement "Iwan, just do it" is set up as a link and is thus actually adressed to the reader. If one clicks a sentence appears saying that Iwan clicked and the time remaining until the explosion is shown. The time pops up for just a moment, since Iwan closes the suitcase immedately. At the end of this hypertext the bomb kills Iwan. 

The meaning behind this setup is obvious: The reader kills the story's character. The sentence "Iwan clicked" makes sure that we do not identify ourself with Iwan. The reader is, by her click action, drawn into the story, not as victim but as perpetrator. This is a shift in the psychological function of the reading process that Lucretius pointed out 2000 years ago in the second book of "On the Nature of Things" (Line 1-4 in book two):

How sweet, to watch from the shore the wind-whipped ocean
Toss someone else's ship in mightly struggle;
Not that the man's distress is cause for mirth -
Your freedom from those troubles is what's sweet.
 

Now, within digital literature, the reader not only delights in watching other peoples' disaster but also causes it, or at least she does not avoid it even though she could have, by refusing the offered link. The aim of this passage is to provide a metareflection on the media and its idea of remote action without consequences.  

There is an allusion to the shipwreck with audience constellation within the text itself, when Iwan complains that the reader enjoys his disaster in cold Moscow from her own warm room. Iwan then threatens the reader with a hand grenade. Unfortunately, the author fails to bring the grenade to the reader. This would have been the other part of interaction: the punishment for what one does on the computer. The author could have programmed something which would happen after the reader has clicked on the link that triggers the bomb. Imagine a confusion on the screen like a simple fade out function or a false virus message followed by a system crash that forces the reader to restart her computer. This would have been an honorable task for hackers; one could call it crime for art's sake. (try again) 

This example raises some other questions about digital literature. The sentence "Und die Bombe tickte" (And the bomb ticked) shows that the digital word can not only express but also act.

  

and the bomb ticked

 

In this case, it does both, like in a play where the stage directions are read out loud during the performance. We may consider it a version of "kinetic poetry" as known from Robert Kendall's works, where the graphical choreography of text coordinates meaning and movement. "The words themselves, as they move and change on screen, become like actors in a theater piece." However, with respect to theater, we also may consider our example redundant, since acters normaly do not say that they are angry or depressed but express it. It does not need to be said, as it is already performed. Therefore, a consequence of the animation seems to be omiting the verb and writing just: "And the bomb" with a blinking 'bomb'.

  

and the bomb 

 

We realize that here the text turns into a sort of double medium, a 'visualisation without pictures'. The next step would be to substitute the word 'bomb' by a blinking picture of a bomb. A further step would be to employ a sound file and have the picture of the bomb ticking. If we consider this to be too much visualisation, as a reduction of the word's signification process to its surface spectacle, we also may object to the presence of the blinking word as evidence of this process.

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